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Another one for the Primeval 100 challenge 176 - bad romance.

Title: Tough
Author: Athene
Fandom: Primeval
Characters: Abby/Connor
Rating: PG                 
Warnings: Angst
Spoilers: None
Challenge: Bad Romance 
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: Not mine. ITV and Impossible Pictures own them.

 

Abby didn’t want romance. Abby wanted tough guys. Bad boys. No strings sex and fun.

Connor was the antithesis of tough guy. Connor was safe. Connor tried so hard at romance; fumbled gestures, stammered words, well meant hugs.

Abby didn’t want love. Love was pain and hurt, and inevitably led to betrayal and loss. ‘Forever’ was always a lie.

Connor said he loved her. Connor wanted ‘happily ever after’. Connor offered everything that Abby was afraid of.

Abby didn’t want to be afraid. She didn’t want to be hurt again.

Better for both of them if she didn’t want Connor.  

 


Date: 2010-09-18 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com
*meep* Poor things.

Sometimes I wonder if Abby best lies are to herself.

Date: 2010-09-18 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
I think she does lie to herself all the time where relationships are concerned. *Something* in her past has made her scared of commitment and relationships, otherwise why would she keep denying her blatantly obvious feelings for Connor?

Date: 2010-09-18 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com
Do you think they will *ever* give us a backstory on those two. Oh I wish! But, I have a sneaking suspicion that that will be left up to us fic writers to continue to produce. *sigh*

Date: 2010-09-18 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Do you think they will *ever* give us a backstory on those two.

I don't know, I doubt it, to be honest. Or if they do, it will probably just be some vague reference to abuse, or a bad relationship in the past, and it'll all get hand-waved away within an episode or two. *also sighs*

Date: 2010-09-18 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com
Yeah, that's what I figured to. It's too bad because Andrew at least, and probably Hannah, can do the dramatic so well. Is it 2011 yet? Agh! Keep in mind, I'm an American and I won't be able to see it right away. :-(

Date: 2010-09-18 04:42 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Abby)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Ouch. Very very ouch.

Date: 2010-09-18 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
the angst bunnies ambushed me big time last night!

Date: 2010-09-18 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Yep, that's them! Spot-on.

Date: 2010-09-18 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
I just wish we knew why...

Date: 2010-09-18 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
That's sad :-( But it fits.

Date: 2010-09-18 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
I seem to be incapable of writing happy drabbles for this pairing since series 3 aired :(

Date: 2010-09-18 05:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Series 3 has rather a lot to answer for! ;-)

Date: 2010-09-18 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com
Oh! Poor Abby. :( This is brilliantly done - and I think you've captured my exact thoughts on Abby's attitude in those 100 words, lol.

Date: 2010-09-18 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
thanks. I wrote most of this last night, but the final line gave me so much trouble, I think I went through about six or seven different versions before I was happy with it.

Date: 2010-09-18 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prehistoriccat.livejournal.com
*meep* so sad, but probably true as well :(

Date: 2010-09-18 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
yeah, we all know she wants Connor, the big question is why Abby seems to fight against that all the time instead of going for it. In all other aspects of her character she seems perfectly sensible and happy, so why is she so scared when it comes to relationships?

Date: 2010-09-18 06:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fredbassett
Poor girl obviously doesn't subscribe to the theory that it's better to have loved and lost than never loved at all.

Date: 2010-09-18 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Yeah, poor Abby. *something* has scared her off, that's for sure.

Date: 2010-09-18 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mysteriousaliwz.livejournal.com
*whimpers*

You're putting us all through the angst mangle again.

Date: 2010-09-18 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Oops? I couldn't possibly let a prompt like that go by without writing angst with this pairing, could I?

Date: 2010-09-18 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
Awww. Poor both of them!

Date: 2010-09-18 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Yeah, they're both making a bit of a mess of it, aren't they?

Date: 2010-09-18 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] casy-dee.livejournal.com
Poor thing. *Sigh* Yes, I think she lies to herself. Lovely drabble.

Date: 2010-09-18 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
thanks. I do wish we knew what it was that has made Abby act like she does when it comes to relationships, because it's really starting to not make sense after everything that she and Connor have been through together.

Date: 2010-09-19 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] casy-dee.livejournal.com
Yeah, don't I know it! Good for us fic writers, though. Maybe they'll let us in on a little bit of it someday, I hope. Until then, it's up to us :)

Date: 2010-09-18 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] olivia-j.livejournal.com
:wibbles: Lovely but heartbreaking. And so very them!

Date: 2010-09-19 09:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
thanks, this pairing do relationship angst so well.

Date: 2010-09-18 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Poor Abby, poor Connor. Great drabble.

Date: 2010-09-19 09:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
thanks, they just can't seem to get it right these two.

Date: 2010-09-19 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] facing-the-wind.livejournal.com
BRB, crying my heart out. Poor babies. :(

Date: 2010-09-19 09:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
*passes you a tissue* They both need to sort themselves out.

Date: 2010-09-19 02:42 am (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (green shirt stephen)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Oh, poor Abby :(

Date: 2010-09-19 09:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
I couldn't resist writing C/A angst for this prompt.

Date: 2010-09-19 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madcatt82.livejournal.com
Oh, ouch!! So sad but so very accurate where the pair of them are concerned!

Date: 2010-09-19 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Thanks. Unfortunately, it's all too like them, and neither of them seems to be capable of changing it.

Date: 2010-09-19 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
Eek! Poor Abby is pretty messed up.
Don't give up, Connor!

Date: 2010-09-19 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Hee, thanks. I'm not sure Connor is *capable* of giving up on Abby! Three years of rejections don't seem to have put him off so far.

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