It's feedback like this that really, really makes it worth the amount of time and effort that I've spent on this fic series.
I know exactly what you mean about wanting to believe in a relationship when you're reading fic, which is why I've been adopting the approach of having quite a slow devlopment over time. That and I'm still not entirely comfortable with writing smut, so in this fic I always intended to focus far more on the relationship and the plot rather than the smut.
"There are emotional consequences which they are dealing with in a realistically blokey way"
I think that comment may have just made my day, thank you. I know exactly where this is going in my mind because I've had the entire plot worked out for months, but I sometimes get this vague worry that people will not buy into where I'm taking the charatcers and what I'm doing with them, but your comments have been really reassuring on that score.
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It's feedback like this that really, really makes it worth the amount of time and effort that I've spent on this fic series.
I know exactly what you mean about wanting to believe in a relationship when you're reading fic, which is why I've been adopting the approach of having quite a slow devlopment over time. That and I'm still not entirely comfortable with writing smut, so in this fic I always intended to focus far more on the relationship and the plot rather than the smut.
"There are emotional consequences which they are dealing with in a realistically blokey way"
I think that comment may have just made my day, thank you. I know exactly where this is going in my mind because I've had the entire plot worked out for months, but I sometimes get this vague worry that people will not buy into where I'm taking the charatcers and what I'm doing with them, but your comments have been really reassuring on that score.
I do hope you enjoy the rest of it.