Uh-ho...cue dramatic music... Not good. So there's an anomaly somewhere and Thomson's men are going to come and the pretties have to run. Oh dear... *iz scared*
I loved this chapter, the whole scene with Abby was great. I love your dialogues so much. And it's great how you could integrate the whole S1 ending into this. But now I'm worried about Stephen's loyalties... ok, not his loyalties bc that's never a question but being utterly loyal to Nick didn't help him much in S2, Helen could play his hurt feelings so well.
That conversation between Connor and Ryan was brilliant too. I really love their slowly evolving relationship.
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I loved this chapter, the whole scene with Abby was great. I love your dialogues so much. And it's great how you could integrate the whole S1 ending into this. But now I'm worried about Stephen's loyalties... ok, not his loyalties bc that's never a question but being utterly loyal to Nick didn't help him much in S2, Helen could play his hurt feelings so well.
That conversation between Connor and Ryan was brilliant too. I really love their slowly evolving relationship.