ext_17514 ([identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] deinonychus_1 2008-01-15 08:02 pm (UTC)

Fantastic! I actually really, really like your characterisation of Connor here, and agree that we definitely need more of that Connor in the series. But this was lovely, even with that trace of bitterness underneath

and this line...

“You’re allowed to say no if you don’t like it.”

...was right about where you owned me!

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